Traci Ashbe Dark Fantasy Author

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Colleen’s Weeky Tanka Poetry Challenge Photo Prompt, a Haiku Traci Kenworth

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Traci Ashbe

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Mouth Agape

Traci Kenworth

A glory divine

raw awakening, birds streak

canyon opening

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7 responses to “Colleen’s Weeky Tanka Poetry Challenge Photo Prompt, a Haiku Traci Kenworth”

  1. Colleen M. Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen M. Chesebro

    This is a perfect Haiku, Traci. You captured the essence of the image perfectly. <3

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    1. tracikenworth Avatar
      tracikenworth

      This time, I used your suggestion of looking at the pic and writing down what came to mind. I still tried to frame it like I’d seen on the other website, setting, subject & action (2 lines) and then reverse it also as I learned. Thank you!

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      1. Colleen M. Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen M. Chesebro

        What a difference! And yes, one of the best tests is to be able to read your poem forward and backward. I’m so proud of your efforts. ❤️

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        1. tracikenworth Avatar
          tracikenworth

          I’m feeling encouraged as well. Thank you!

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      tracikenworth

      Thank you again!

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  2. Vashti Q Avatar
    Vashti Q

    A lovely haiku, Traci! I like how you mentioned the canyon instead of the obvious sunrise/set. Brilliant! <3

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    1. tracikenworth Avatar
      tracikenworth

      Thank you, Vashti!

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